script problems 1/14/19

We finished our script but came across numerous problems. It is good in terms of how it is planned out but we failed in in the format and how it was supposed to look. Another problem we came across was we were being to repetitive in sentences and not letting it flow. We also grammatically didn’t look it over and try to fix it but we knew what it was going to be about. We need to fix all these problems and more than anything get the format right because it is the most important thing when writing a script. Another problem was it being to short. We didn’t intend for it to be short it was that the story ended there. We came up with some ideas to make it longer to add more drama and suspense to the script and make the story longer.